Keep a poem in your pocket
and a picture in your head
and you’ll never feel lonely
at night when you’re in bed.
~ Beatrice Schenk de Regniers (“Keep a Poem in Your Pocket”)
So begins J. Patrick Lewis’s brand new poetry picture book, in which he pairs 13 classic poems on a variety of subjects with his own inventive parodies. Beatrice Schenk de Regnier’s opening poem sets the tone by touting the delights of the imagination, while Lewis’s poetic response (“Keep a Pocket in Your Poem”) advises us to think up wondrous, concrete objects (“red hawk feather,/silver penny, pinkie ring”) to spark the creative process.
In his introduction, Lewis explains that writing a parody is the best way to pay tribute to someone else’s work. He’s clearly a poet who likes to tweak, twist and tinker — not only with words, but with ideas, thoughts, and emotions.
As old poem faces off against new, it’s interesting to see the different directions Lewis has taken as he echoes, mimics, and counters. With this side by side format, young readers are given great examples of how one might imitate a well-known poem, whether they choose to express a similar sentiment (Lewis’s “Winter Warmth” in response to Langston Hughes’s “Winter Sweetness”), or contrast the original (Lewis’s “Rats” vs. Rose Flyeman’s “Mice,” or Lewis’s “Hail” vs Carl Sandburg’s “Fog”).
Though we tend to think in terms of humor when we see the word “parody,” Lewis explores other emotions as well, from sad and serious (“Grief is the thing with tissues”), to reflective and wistful (“This little book is cocoa./It warms me when it steams”), to enchanting and wondrous (“She climbs late summer skies and sends/Important messages to friends . . . /Confetti blinkers on rear ends”).
Johanna Wright’s vibrant acrylic and ink illustrations (digitally fine-tuned) amplify the poems’ various moods with a predominantly blue and purple palette. Her naif drawings of children and animals lend an air of joy and playfulness to each spread, and kids will love picking out the endearing details (mice nibbling on chocolate chip cookies, a grey kitty peeking out of a second floor window, kids tucked into their tree branch beds).
Keep a Pocket in Your Poem (Wordsong, 2017), is both a nice introduction to a baker’s dozen of classic poems as well as a good mentor text for budding poets. Since one has to know the original quite well before attempting to imitate it, this is a sneaky way to make kids carefully study how and why these poems work with regard to structure, subject, and mood. 🙂
Of course, there’s also the sheer pleasure of reading these poems aloud, while enjoying Lewis’s trademark wit, whimsy, and wordplay. He’s truly one of our most versatile and beloved children’s poets, and this new title would make a fabulous addition to any school or home library.
Today, I’m happy to share three poem-and-parody pairs. I would say Lewis’s response to Robert Frost’s poem is probably the most traditionally parodic in the book, but I also love his Tennyson and Stevenson “revisions.” Enjoy!
STOPPING BY WOODS ON A SNOWY EVENING
by Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village, though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
STOPPING BY FRIDGE ON A HUNGRY EVENING
by J. Patrick Lewis
Whose mold this is I think I know.
My mother won’t admit it, though;
She hates it when I peek inside
To watch her fiendish fungus grow.
My little sister cried and cried
To see a pound cake . . . petrified!
That quart of milk’s about to blast.
The cottage cheese has multiplied!
The mustard’s green, the mayo’s past
The expiration date — not last
November?! No, it can’t be true.
The algae’s brown and creeping fast.
The eggs are black, the meat is blue!
There’s only one thing left to do:
Get the hose and hire a crew,
Get the hose and hire a crew.
by Alfred, Lord Tennyson
He clasps the crag with crooked hands;
Close to the sun in lonely lands,
Ring’d with the azure world, he stands.
The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls;
He watches from his mountain walls,
And like a thunderbolt he falls.
by J. Patrick Lewis
She climbs late summer skies and sends
Important messages to friends . . .
Confetti blinkers on rear ends.
Who knows which meadow she came from
Through cricket and cicada hum?
But look, she’s waltzed onto my thumb.
by Robert Louis Stevenson
The world is so full of a number of things,
I’m sure we should all be as happy as kings.
by J. Patrick Lewis
The world is so full of a number of dreams,
I’m sure all our pillows should burst at the seams.
And here’s a bonus pair of haiku from the back cover:
The toad! It looks like
it could belch
The tiger! It looks like
the sun has been put
~ J. Patrick Lewis
KEEP A POCKET IN YOUR POEM: Classic Poems and Playful Parodies
written and selected by J. Patrick Lewis
illustrated by Johanna Wright
published by Wordsong, March 2017
Poetry Picture Book for ages 5-10, 32 pp.
🍎 SPECIAL BOOK GIVEAWAY! 📕
The publisher has generously donated a copy of this book for one lucky Alphabet Soup reader. For a chance to win, please leave a comment at this post no later than midnight (EDT) May 2, 2017. You may also enter by sending an email with POCKET in the subject line to: readermail (at) jamakimrattigan (dot) com. Giveaway open to U.S. residents only, please. Good Luck!
Keep a pocket in your poem,
for imagination grows
from the deepest secret pockets
every pocket poet knows.
~ J. Patrick Lewis (“Keep a Pocket in Your Poem”)
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*Interior spreads from Keep a Pocket in Your Poem posted by permission of the publisher, text copyright © 2017 J. Patrick Lewis, illustrations © 2017 Johanna Wright, published by Wordsong. All rights reserved.
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